Post by τwï-τwï</3 on Mar 5, 2008 19:00:51 GMT -5
Hey! I'm writing a warrior's story and so far i've filled up 3\4 of a notebook! Well here is part of it... btw, i made up all the names (blueheart is the deputy of LightClan)
"You were mewling something in your sleep." Leafstorm, an elderly warrior mewed.
"Oh, sorry, Leafstorm," Blueheart mewed worridly.
"That's fine," Leafstorm replied, "Is there anything I can do?"
'Well, could you tell Dawnrose to take Sharpclaw, Razortooth, Runningpaw, and two apprentices with her on an EmberClan border patrol?" Blueheart answered.
"Sure, I'll tell her when she wakes up." Leafstorm mewed as she dipped her head respectfully to Blueheart.
"Thanks Leafstorm," Blueheart mewed greatfully as she padded out of the Warrior's den.
Flameclaw and Spottedfeather were sharing a mouse near the Elder's den. Blue heart walked over to them and mewed, "Would you come on a border patrol with me when your finished?"
"Sure!" they chimed simaltainiously.
As the three cats were walking through the forest, Blueheart felt like something bad was about to happen. She shook the thought away and led her patrol towards the IceClan border. NOthing was out of the ordinary. Blueheart, Spottedfeather, and Flameclaw checked the whole border and renewed the scent. After making sure all was well, they headed back to camp. Blueheart kept thinking about claws and teeth digging into something. She kept shivering and noticed Flameclaw and Spottedfeather staring at her. All of a sudden, Dawnrose pelted by.
"Wha-" Blueheart mewed.
"Go back to camp, we are getting attacked!" she replied, not even stopping.
Without saying anything, the three cats bounded back to camp. When they arrived, a horrible scene awaited them. LighClan was fighting EmberClan and LeafClan, LightClan outnumbered. Flameclaw and Spottedfeather sprang into battle and Blueheart spotted Maplestar fighting Foxfur and Talltail. Remembering Maplestar was on her last life, Blueheart jumped in to help her. She landed on Foxfur, who was about to jump on Maplestar. Visciously, Blueheart bit Foxfur's ear. Foxfur flipped over, but this time Blueheart was ready, she jumped out of they way, causing Foxfur to slam into Talltail. Then Starshine crashed into her, pinning her to the ground.
"Time to finish what I started, runt!" Starshine hissed.
"You wish!" Blueheart retorted.
Starshine began to rake her claws along Blueheart's underbelly. Blueheart hopelessly struggled, then Maplestar punced on Starshine, biting her leg. Starshine ran tail between legs out of LightClan's camp. Blueheart looked around the camp, LightClan need help, badly. They had taken out many enemy warriors, but were becoming weaker.
Sparrowpaw ran up to Blueheart and panted, "Brambleberry! She's getting attacked in her den!"
Blueheart sprinted to Brambleberry's den, followed by Sparrowpaw. Brambleberry was surrounded by Greystream, Deadheart, and Nighteyes. With hisses of fury, Sparrowpaw and Blueheart launched themselves onto the enemy warriors. Blueheart landed on Deadheart, an EmberClan warrior. Sparrowpaw was fighting like a TigerClan cat against Greystream. In one quick move, Blueheart had Deadheart pinned down. She bit his shoulder, sending him running away. All of a sudden, a squeal of pain was head, Greystream was biting Sparrowpaw's neck.
"Sparrowpaw!" she yowled as she ran towards him.
At the same time she was trying to help Sparrowpaw, Nighteyes had Brambleberry pinned down. As if it were a dream, everything happen in slow motion. Blueheart jumped on Greystream, bit her ear, and whipped around to help Brambleberry. But, it was too late, Nighteyes ran back into the battle, leaving Blueheart and Sparrowpaw by themselves. Brambleberry was lying motionless on the ground, her belly bleeding.
"No!!!" Blueheart yowled desperately.
There was no hope, Blueheart's medicine cat and close friend was gone, forever.
well this defently wasn't all of it, just a page or two! please leave comments, hope ya like it!
"You were mewling something in your sleep." Leafstorm, an elderly warrior mewed.
"Oh, sorry, Leafstorm," Blueheart mewed worridly.
"That's fine," Leafstorm replied, "Is there anything I can do?"
'Well, could you tell Dawnrose to take Sharpclaw, Razortooth, Runningpaw, and two apprentices with her on an EmberClan border patrol?" Blueheart answered.
"Sure, I'll tell her when she wakes up." Leafstorm mewed as she dipped her head respectfully to Blueheart.
"Thanks Leafstorm," Blueheart mewed greatfully as she padded out of the Warrior's den.
Flameclaw and Spottedfeather were sharing a mouse near the Elder's den. Blue heart walked over to them and mewed, "Would you come on a border patrol with me when your finished?"
"Sure!" they chimed simaltainiously.
As the three cats were walking through the forest, Blueheart felt like something bad was about to happen. She shook the thought away and led her patrol towards the IceClan border. NOthing was out of the ordinary. Blueheart, Spottedfeather, and Flameclaw checked the whole border and renewed the scent. After making sure all was well, they headed back to camp. Blueheart kept thinking about claws and teeth digging into something. She kept shivering and noticed Flameclaw and Spottedfeather staring at her. All of a sudden, Dawnrose pelted by.
"Wha-" Blueheart mewed.
"Go back to camp, we are getting attacked!" she replied, not even stopping.
Without saying anything, the three cats bounded back to camp. When they arrived, a horrible scene awaited them. LighClan was fighting EmberClan and LeafClan, LightClan outnumbered. Flameclaw and Spottedfeather sprang into battle and Blueheart spotted Maplestar fighting Foxfur and Talltail. Remembering Maplestar was on her last life, Blueheart jumped in to help her. She landed on Foxfur, who was about to jump on Maplestar. Visciously, Blueheart bit Foxfur's ear. Foxfur flipped over, but this time Blueheart was ready, she jumped out of they way, causing Foxfur to slam into Talltail. Then Starshine crashed into her, pinning her to the ground.
"Time to finish what I started, runt!" Starshine hissed.
"You wish!" Blueheart retorted.
Starshine began to rake her claws along Blueheart's underbelly. Blueheart hopelessly struggled, then Maplestar punced on Starshine, biting her leg. Starshine ran tail between legs out of LightClan's camp. Blueheart looked around the camp, LightClan need help, badly. They had taken out many enemy warriors, but were becoming weaker.
Sparrowpaw ran up to Blueheart and panted, "Brambleberry! She's getting attacked in her den!"
Blueheart sprinted to Brambleberry's den, followed by Sparrowpaw. Brambleberry was surrounded by Greystream, Deadheart, and Nighteyes. With hisses of fury, Sparrowpaw and Blueheart launched themselves onto the enemy warriors. Blueheart landed on Deadheart, an EmberClan warrior. Sparrowpaw was fighting like a TigerClan cat against Greystream. In one quick move, Blueheart had Deadheart pinned down. She bit his shoulder, sending him running away. All of a sudden, a squeal of pain was head, Greystream was biting Sparrowpaw's neck.
"Sparrowpaw!" she yowled as she ran towards him.
At the same time she was trying to help Sparrowpaw, Nighteyes had Brambleberry pinned down. As if it were a dream, everything happen in slow motion. Blueheart jumped on Greystream, bit her ear, and whipped around to help Brambleberry. But, it was too late, Nighteyes ran back into the battle, leaving Blueheart and Sparrowpaw by themselves. Brambleberry was lying motionless on the ground, her belly bleeding.
"No!!!" Blueheart yowled desperately.
There was no hope, Blueheart's medicine cat and close friend was gone, forever.
well this defently wasn't all of it, just a page or two! please leave comments, hope ya like it!